First photo: We see she is visiting a grave, but we don't know how bad it making her feel... so the 2nd photo seems like a huge leap. You might want to reshoot and show more emotion here.
Then, there is another huge leap from the 2nd to the 3rd photo....How does she get from the cutting photo to the praying photo?
I really think you need to re-shoot the last image. I don't know if she needs to revisit the grave instead, perhaps, it would be better to see her getting on with her life...or at least standing up to make it different from the 1st photo. The last and 1st photos are too similar.
Brooke,
ReplyDeleteI like your idea, but it has some issues.
First photo: We see she is visiting a grave, but we don't know how bad it making her feel... so the 2nd photo seems like a huge leap. You might want to reshoot and show more emotion here.
Then, there is another huge leap from the 2nd to the 3rd photo....How does she get from the cutting photo to the praying photo?
I really think you need to re-shoot the last image. I don't know if she needs to revisit the grave instead, perhaps, it would be better to see her getting on with her life...or at least standing up to make it different from the 1st photo. The last and 1st photos are too similar.